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The cat must be eight down,

He looks so tired

When he walks down the stairs,

Keeping his back leg raised in the air

Then pausing halfway

As if to wonder whether

He meant to go down or up after all.

His hair is thinning

And there’s pigment in his right eye

The vet says may or may not be

Liver damage,

And still here he is,

A shadow treading darkness,

To lie beside me

As he has done many nights past,

Helping to calm my heart

When the world is quite

And the worst questions are asked,

Until I find sleep

When at three or four

He will rejoin the shadows

And leave once more

To wherever that may be.

But I know that one night soon

He will move off

A final time and not return

To leave me alone,

Like a widow on the night’s shore,

Far worse than he.

◄ Late Night

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 17th Dec 2015 17:39

And so do I really like this. It's beautifully written, .very sensitive

Only today my husband asked: Do you remember all the cats we've had since we were married? Right out of the blue, the question was. I went down the shortish list, reminding him of the when's and where's, each one in order, name, colour, etc. He was impressed, but he had missed only one. We are 'cat people' too, but we no longer have a pet. It seems odd that I have noticed this poem this evening.

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raypool

Sun 15th Nov 2015 19:55

I love this Tom. The idea of the stairs like a descent into the unknown future, of being left alone with the mystery of a cat left intact and respected, with the human spirit in a fragile state, personified by the old fella going away to another world.

Ray

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