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Bow window

Life is.....

Like looking through glass 

In a bow window....... 

The view you have

Depends on where you're stood 

Looking in.... 

Can be very distorted

If seen through 

A bullseye glass.

We like to think we have a clear view 

Of all we see and do

Oh! How we delude ourselves....

Or is that just me?

Would be perfect if I could only stand 

Dead centre 

Through clear glass

Have a straight forward look at all  that is there

Laid out and in plain view

 

 

 

◄ Fish in the fog!

Who is this sod called God? ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 11th Nov 2015 12:02

And you were very insightful to condense your expansive thoughts to these few simple but very strong words that speak volumes. I think this ability is a poet's gift.

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Anita Connor

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 23:14

Thanks Ledger. This was something I wrote a long time ago as a very long poem of explanation about different views and perspectives on life. I decided I didn't need the explanation!

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Anita Connor

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 23:11

Thank you David. Never realised so much can be said in so few words.

Anita

<Deleted User> (8659)

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 14:37

Anita, this is great. Ledger

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