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For me, it is a great sight,

Beautiful and profound.

Though it pains my eyes,

Pestering like a ray of light,

Even blurring the unclear view of the cloud sea. 


Straying away from smoothness,

There comes a forceful thrust,

Piercing within,

Ailing the peace in my mind,

Hurting the music in my soul. 


Like a journey, once known,

Towards where I am destined for.

Then a sudden thought...

Wondering, asking...

Where do I go now?

Now, an unknown quest.


For me, it feels wonderful,

Swimming onto the misty sea,

Wishing to stay even for a while.

Yet, where I am it hurts,

Bothers so hard I wish to go. 


But where? 

Where do I go? 

Where do I take off? 

And in wherever,

Where do I land? 

In where?

Once Upon A Dream ►


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Tommy Carroll

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 11:45

Lost at sea...and the fear of surviving? Welcome Marianne. Tommy

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 11:35

Interesting first piece Marianne, look forward to seeing more of your work.

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