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This is a Holy Death

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this is a holy death
ripping straight through
the hopes of those taken
and those that will miss them ..

at the bus stop
coffee bar
school yard
work place 
canteen

So many empty seats 
never to be filled again 
Holes in each and every Turk

this was your holy death
your passport to celestial angels 
and Allah's warm embrace

and if he is there ? 
to meet you ?
then...
your religion is a
dis...
Grace

(c) David R Mellor 2015

◄ MUSHY I AM

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David R Mellor

Tue 20th Oct 2015 20:33

thanks Cynthia for taking the time to comment and thought provoking . i can only write what comes to the mind or spirit

thanks again

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 17th Oct 2015 17:55

A strong and honest work about a very convoluted situation. Perhaps it would be wiser to pose a question about a motivation that defies humanitarian understanding, rather than a conclusion. You would certainly be aware of that. And you would still have made your point very effectively.

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