Sleepless (Part Two)
Sleepless (Part Two)
…………and sleepless I drive
Down a land beset with
Mines,
Mines that destroy
Families and cattle,
Make stumps of legs
And heads go missing,
A story to unfold.
Comments
Hi Mike, Im commenting for all the series of poems just put up. Some very powerful imagery here. You obviously have very deep feelings about the horror and futility of war. Are you a war veteran yourself? Is this all first hand experience?
Cate xx
Hi, not goona put more in for now. Just making a few entries and if you wish, can continue with more, but wont leave too much perhaps every other night. Its a journey i feel many could share.
If there are probs then give me feedback.
Be well all
mike
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
winston plowes
Fri 19th Jun 2009 01:10
And I am worried about teaching in a rough school in leeds tomorrow ! Caught up now. Would have said things differently if I had looked at the whole thing like cate but will leave it as it is to show you my thought process, thankyou for posting this unfolding story. I await the next enstallment. As you say maybe the best way is one every couple of days or so. Win , Peace. x