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MARY CAN'T MAKE IT THURSDAY

Mary can't make it Thursday

but Elsie thinks she can.

Mary can make it Friday

but Elsie is minding Dan.

Maisie is going away all week

but after that she could come

but Mary and Elsie won't be around

and next week i'll be having Mum.

Hettie is available twenty four seven

a meet up would do her good,

but Mary and Hettie don't hit it off

though Elsie thinks they should.

Poppy's prospects are rather lean

but she's keen to make it somehow

but her brother is ailing

eyesight is failing

but she'll come if time will allow.

 

Terrible news!        i've called it all off

Jan's coming down with Ron

to stay for a month with Jack and Jill

so it's up and downhill from now on.

ladies

◄ THE BABIES

PEAKS AND TROUGHS ►

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 8th Aug 2015 16:32

Just re-read this Ray. Are you sure you're not Max Miller's love child? Best thing I've read for ages.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 8th Aug 2015 16:27

I endorse the comments from GS. This is clever - with a
perfectly set up conclusion.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 8th Aug 2015 15:02

Brilliant work Ray, very cleverly worked out.

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