Despair
DESPAIR
You seduced
the moon,
undressing it
with your soul.
You aroused
the stars,
turning them on
with melancholy.
You tortured
them with
anticipation.
You wern't into
long distance
relationships
Comments
<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 5th Jun 2009 21:22
hi George
Clever and I really love the personification of emotions...this is a fine example
What a shock for the reader as well as yourself George. Like the astral imagery combined with the simple statement ' but you weren't into long distance relationships' - is caustic the word I am looking for? But understandably so.
Love how I am reading along going awww...
and then comes the ending!
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Chris Dawson
Fri 5th Jun 2009 22:48
Very good. Like the surprise at the end.
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