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A poet at prayer

(before the idea of man/woman Christian marriage vanishes utterly, a re-post about what it was all about)

 

WIFE WISH

(an ode)

 

Lord, send me a natural woman.
A straight, proud, toss her head,
Fling back her curl,
Thoroughbred,
Steady-eyed girl
With satin-supple flesh.
Let September sunsets through a mesh
Of low mist glint
And deepen her hair to a copper-gold tint.
Let her be lovely, and lissom, and lithe.
And all her outlook calm, untroubled, and blithe.

And, Lord, let her form be all symmetry to the eye.
From the crescent curve of her calf to her smooth, straight thigh.
From her full sleek hips and her waist – Greek goddess styled,
To her breasts, firm for her man`s fondling, soft for the blind-eyed nuzzling of a child.
Aye, let her not be with her own womanhood at strife,
Send me a willing-welcome, whole of heart, and deeply female wife.
A woman in who`s warm womb a man might kindle life.

Then, Lord, send us a great – a grown love,
Some of your own love.
No placid-ever-after,
Chew-the-cud, content-love.
But a - rocked on tears and laughter –
Glory-bent love.

And since who seeks glory forfeits glory`s price,
Why worry we if we pass through days of ice,
Or arids of Arizona strays.
There`ll be quench-thirst
Freshets, dew-ways
Blossom and bud-burst
Heart-leap Easter days,
Seas of summer shoal in sunny bays,
And, at the end of it all…Paradise.

And, finally,

 Lord, as the season-times weather our love,
(Father of all far flight)
Tether our love
To the home, feed the hearth`s light.
Build it around with brick.
Oh, Lord, send me that woman – and send her quick!

◄ Choice...Realisation...Consequence.

Any poet`s answer to the Astronauts ►

Comments

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Jun 2015 16:23

I applaud the consistency of the imagery in pursuit of an "ideal". We are conditioned in so many ways in this life,
so let us relish the imagination to support the hope of being blessed with that which we seek.
In recognition of that hope, as the late great Dave Allen used to say, clearly mindful and respectful of its many
and varied meanings: "May your God go with you."

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 28th Jun 2015 20:44

Oh, dear, Oh dear,

Far from wishing to cause controversy, I re-posted this as a personal reminder of my own, Christian Ideal of marital happiness.

I own absolutely that such a happiness is equally possible to any atheist or any other `ìst` whatsoever. (according to my lights God makes this kind of stuff available to anyone who strives for it)

I don`t mind the comments widening it, but would wish (seeing that this is a poetry blog) that they made any
points about it using the words of the poem.

These are `àbout` an urgent desire for attractive and sexually physical female beauty (including the child -bearing aspect of it), and a recognition that life afterwards would not be all a bed of roses, but end in final happiness.

I was half-expecting to be accused of indulging in an impossible kind of starry-eyed optimism...but there you are!

My - amused - concern about all this recent same-sex stuff is about what happens when they start suing for the restoration of `conjugal` rights. Or (the way it is going) when some starlet pleads to be allowed to wed her chihuahua.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 28th Jun 2015 14:25

Hugh this isn't the right forum to have a serious discussion about monotheism or atheism. I do not castigate anyone for being of a religious bent. One of my closest pals is a vicar. But you are wrong in your attestation:

"a good relationship founded on the loyalty of love is truly a gift from The Almighty".

I did have a choice and I chose well.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 28th Jun 2015 13:17

Can't agree Hugh, sorry. As a confirmed atheist married for 44 years now I'm living proof you don't need an idol to believe in. Love exists in everyone. It's just the finding of it!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 26th Jun 2015 13:27

Here here Harry. You feeling like that too! They were the days eh?

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