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Emotion without words
How does that work?
Display happiness with
A smiley face
Slighty abuse
Or amuse with 
A winky face

Show sadness with
A downturned U 
When you are so 
Downturned 
U don’t even know U
Are U

;)

◄ SOMETIMES

RePlaCeMeNT bUs ►

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Andy N

Mon 8th Jun 2015 12:45

i like the shortness of this piece, lynn. suits you well. really enjoyed it x

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Andy N

Mon 8th Jun 2015 12:45

i like the shortness of this piece, lynn. suits you well. really enjoyed it x

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 23rd May 2015 20:37

enigmatic pencilling...

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Thu 21st May 2015 13:20

a lot of U's wasted that could have been emphasized ?

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 20th May 2015 18:47

Tight simple poems are often the best.

I must admit though, I wanted to read it as

Display happiness with
A. smiley face
B. slightly abuse
Or C. amuse with
A. winky face

Don't know why :)
x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 20th May 2015 15:12

Very clever in idea and presentation.

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