Summer Awhaikuing
Stronger in numbers;
the leaves a deaf audience
clapping spring's last bow.
Comments
Interesting idea, Cathy. I love haiku - clever title. You find the 'leaves deaf' and I find them full of sound. So I had to sit and think a bit as to what you might mean.
Check 'spring's' .
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Cathy Crabb
Sun 17th May 2015 20:19
Ha ha Steve yes, I did think to myself 'you're being a smart arse'
thanks Cynthia just corrected that- grammar is like an annoying little brother to me; tripping me up when I try and show off.
But in case you didn't know Cynthia- applause in sign language is hands up in the air waving (kind of like 'jazz hands')
This is a version of a set of seasonal haikus I am doing for a public art commission.