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Apple Carts and Upsets

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Bouazizi wanted a life of dignity

nothing unusual really, just education for his sisters

and little things that one would take for granted

were free.

The Arab Spring came on, Twitter on fire

Facebook ran cold with blood of young men

heads cracked open,

brotherhood defined better than any religion could

word it

selfies halted for a brief moment

armchair likers waking up to people taking control

of their lives, the race of ordinary people

with ordinary desires

youth with dreams, passion and a better world

not to plant seeds of destruction

but just lead mundane lives

going about business as usual.

A young Tunisian led the way

a fruit seller, vendor

an ordinary man, wishing to lead an ordinary life.

His little cart stands in the square,

a reminder

immortalized in history

but fading.

Yes, some people do get upset

for apple carts can topple governments

and dictators, domino effects

going down in books of history

through a burning man.

 

 

 

 

◄ The Mediocrity Curse

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 16th May 2015 14:12

Very powerful work, Preeti. You are definitely inspiring a fan club.

Lan

Sat 16th May 2015 02:56

Preeti, what can I say, this is great, leaves me wanting to know more, which I love x

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 15th May 2015 09:34

Hi Preeti.You have honoured me by taking my advice(which isn't the spoken, I hasten to add!...;o)

YOUR changes work beautifully.

Thank you.
Rose.x

Preeti Sinha

Fri 15th May 2015 07:42

Rose, thank you so much! I made some changes, tell me if they work.
Graham, any comment, praise or otherwise from you makes me ridiculously happy. It's as if the school principal has personally noticed your work or the coolest, hippest person has given a seal of approval...

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 14th May 2015 19:21

You are developing into a serious observer Preeti. More like this please.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 14th May 2015 09:44

WOW Preeti! no wonder 'whoever' aint better than you!
fantastic poem!

One tiny suggestion re the last line.

'Far more than the whole history of apple carts?'

Or something similar.Just feel this great poem deserves a much stronger punch line,and repeating 'upset' spoils it a little.

Thank you.
Rose.x

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