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Oh!my beloved past lovers!
men,who sustained me
with pleasure,in our pleasant youth
when our young minds
were giddily inflamed
those who now sing to their grandchildren
classic songs of a lost era
and walk precariously
in clothes they defiantly swore
they would never be seen dead in
although
on one nearing day
in unfortunate circumstances
they might.
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© Patricia Wilde Sunday 10th May 2015
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 10th May 2015 09:51
oh! those memories Patricia! I get what the gist of what the final three lines are aiming at,but if it read-
'although on one nearing day
in unfortunate circumstances
they might.'
might help to clarify?
love it anyway.x
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 10th May 2015 20:38
Thanks Rose.Yep,will use your clarifying suggestions.
Patricia.xx