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Three downfalls

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Once located

at the start line

with a lot to say 

gave them reasons

to adress the crowds

 

now,having a lot less to say,

now,those crowds have turned away,

instead of loudly vocalising

they have very different locations.

 

The very much hushed

finishing post of embarrassment

and failure.

 

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© Patricia Wilde Saturday 9th May 2015  

◄ Looking for the sky

Old flames old pains ►

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 9th May 2015 22:48

cheers chuck! xx

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 9th May 2015 12:38

what a result eh!? 'very much hushed' I wonder?
neat piece mateys.x

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