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Attention without intention
And the heart is worth so much more
Than to be bound in such detention
Or to be counted another notch or score.
A time in life comes to raise one’s eyes
Away from such an ugly scene
A wall against the dancefloor lies
To achieve and acquire a beautiful dream
So rise above such squalid invention
It’s just flirting
Attention without intention.
Pete Crompton
Thu 21st May 2009 22:48
good one!
Such a contrast to your last poem. It seems inconceivable that the same poet could have penned the two. I like this one.
On my way out the door, but had to comment on this one...
Love it Sebastian... especially the first verse : )
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Isobel
Thu 21st May 2009 23:46
Of all your poems, my favourite - a simple message delivered beautifully.