Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Note: No profile exists for this entry - most likely it was deleted.

You Bore Me

You bore me.

I wish it were not true

but you do.

You talk about things

that five years ago

gave me wings

but now throw

me from this

well worn window.

You haven't changed

or grown, meanwhile

I have forraged, flourished,

flown and now somehow

though somewhat

sadly known -

you bore me.

◄ Reravelling

Love Me; Let Me Be ►

Comments

Profile image

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 25th Apr 2015 15:23

Short and punchy, with a lot packed into a few words. 'You bore me' is probably the deadliest sentence one can ever say to a 'friend/lover'. Far worse than 'I don't love/like you anymore.'

Plus it is skillfully crafted.

Profile image

Corr Lens

Sat 25th Apr 2015 13:13

I know exactly what you're feeling with this one

Preeti Sinha

Sat 25th Apr 2015 12:59

So beautiful, but with a sense of loss for what you must have had once...

Lan

Sat 25th Apr 2015 09:36

HI Nat, I love the honesty of this one, particularly 'You talk about...well worn window' - brought a little smile to my face xx

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message