In The End
-the ramblings of another young girl-
written: 2/14/15
Darling,
I know I love you now.
But my mother once loved my father
and the ocean claims to love the shore,
but in the end who always ends up
washing back out to sea?
.L.m.P.
Comments
short but certainly not sweet.
lot said in a few lines.
excellent stuff.
Oooooh, you are sinical. And there was me thinking love is forever. Your poem gives two fingers to my always and forever love. A nice sideways on kind of poem.
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.L.m.P.
Wed 4th Mar 2015 05:20
Jackie Phillips, I'm glad it caught your eye! I had been debating for a while on whether or not to post it, but I'm certainly glad I did!
Andy N, Thank you very much! It means so much to me that you enjoyed it!