YOU STOP TIME
Time heals
Time kneels
Too quick
Too fast
Too slowly
Over painful moments
Quicker…
At the moments
We want to last
It opens the day
And closes our eyes.
And I’m happy at
Every beat of our day
And the moments
Spent…
In your eyes
© David R Mellor 2015
thanks Rose yes that works too and glad you like it
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 23rd Feb 2015 11:49
Hi David-yep,great poem-BUT! personally,I would have finished with the tenth line.But then,as the old adage goes-what do I know?-haha!
Cheers!x
Mamta
Mon 23rd Feb 2015 02:01
A poem so simple so sweet and heart touching !!!
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David R Mellor
Tue 3rd Mar 2015 19:48
ahh thank you Mamta pleases me no end that you found it touching