Held on to the start

forgot that time had past

the few to many goodbyes inbetween

and didn't realise that what we had was lost

tried re-tracing my steps

must have tripped over the feelingsĀ i use to get

shouldve let go

when you said you didn't know

I guess I just hoped that you could remember what i wouldn't let go of.

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Emma

Mon 5th Jan 2015 23:30

Hi Andy I have no idea what's going on with the capital letters I'll have to fix it up, glade you enjoyed this poem thanks for your feed back it's always appreciated :)

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Andy N

Mon 5th Jan 2015 22:30

good to see you back, Emmy... enjoyed this as i have your other pieces, but the changes between capitals and none capital words at the start of each line did confuse me a little but the last line ties it together..

good stuff. keep it up andy

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