WHILST THE SEA SINGS PRAYERS
I am singing
Whilst the sea
Collects prayers
Settles to sleep
Unmoved by grief
I am not waiting
For it to sweep over me
I sleep whilst the
Sea sings prayers
© David R Mellor 2014
I'm sorry I don't understand Collects prayers and sweep seems wrong to me too.
Love the brevity and can almost feel the sea breathing in this.
well done David.
regards,
Graham
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David R Mellor
Mon 22nd Dec 2014 20:41
thanks for your lovely comment , the bit you mention is about loss at sea and how we feel open in the presence of nature