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Pink Tree

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How far? How far do you grow
your cute thoughts into their air,
blot cottons of arms, sugar sweet
in the shimmy?
 
The sky is a solemn blue,
the plain is flat and empty,
save for you, Pink Tree, you
and your hello.
 
Hello, hello, hello -
the rain dollops. Big fat hellos,
laughing too. Smacked right down
on to your pink palms.
 
You are the saddest of all trees.
No one knows 
how you drink brown
dirt from other’s shoes,
 
offering your many 
willing ears too; pink foam
places for others to mock,
say you are just a simple pink tree.

 

 

 

◄ Burns

Eyas ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 23rd Aug 2014 16:13

I love this - you weave imagination out of and into the picture. You, yourself, must greatly enjoy the painting first, before you sink your thoughts into the possible ethos of the painter.

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Thu 21st Aug 2014 15:35

thank you for the comments.

Candice - i wish I painted it! It is gorgeous yes? It is by Thomas Lamb


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Candice Reineke

Wed 6th Aug 2014 00:14

Ah, you've made Pink Tree such a likable character. Did you also create the image? It's beautiful too.

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Mikhail Smith

Tue 5th Aug 2014 20:46

.. this is very, very good .. your poetic style is exceptional, and deep ....

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