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TENDER GODS.

If tender gods should have us kiss
I would fetch and show you this:
my written witness, sworn and kept
through days my shy desire crept.
You would learn how I became
so fond of you I called your name;
dreaming somehow you might hear,
and having heard, would wish me near.

But tender gods no more exist
than dragons do and if we kissed
it would not be unfolding fate
which led us to that happy state
but me, amid my fear, admitting
nursing something unremitting;
hoping then, that once you knew,
you’d say you felt the same way too.

◄ THE VANITY PROJECT.

GARDENING. ►

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Travis Brow

Thu 21st Aug 2014 06:19

Thank you for your lovely comment Cynthia.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 20th Aug 2014 12:00

Andy, how refreshing - deep thoughts simply put, and with the confidence of harnessed style elegantly expressed. Seeing this type of lovely verse still practised is a joy.

Travis Brow

Wed 20th Aug 2014 06:49

Thank you Starfish, i'm pleased you like it.

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Starfish

Mon 11th Aug 2014 22:46

Beautiful!

Travis Brow

Fri 8th Aug 2014 06:10

Thank you Harry.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 7th Aug 2014 22:30


Nice humble poem (with `proper`:)end rhyming)

Travis Brow

Thu 7th Aug 2014 06:03

Thanks Dom, 'quiet and pleasing'; i like that.

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Dominic James

Wed 6th Aug 2014 09:23

This is quiet and pleasing, a reminder of love, tender and fond indeed. If perhaps there are dragons, there would also be gentle gods.

Travis Brow

Wed 6th Aug 2014 06:33

Thank you both for your comments. This was inspired by someone who still doesn't know i harboured feelings.

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mahaba mahaba

Sun 3rd Aug 2014 18:42

Yes...this is it!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 3rd Aug 2014 12:44

Consistent quality in imagery and versifying -
with a nice human pay-off.

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