THE RED ROOM

There's a boy
In a house
In a room
Thinking of you.

There's a girlĀ 
In a house
In a room
Thinking of you.

There's a boy
There's a girl
Who believe
They are in the same room.

love

◄ THE AFTERMATH OF A BROKEN HEART

My Smile Is Not For You ►

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Emma

Fri 30th May 2014 10:09

Thank you for your positive feedback, I appreciate it.

I titled it "The Red Room" as red has connotations with love and the heart which is the main theme of the poem.

It is really about distance, not being with the one you love however, feeling within yourself that you are with them.

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Dominic James

Thu 29th May 2014 10:38

I like this one Em, I take it is a new life observation, in which the boy and girl just maybe one.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 29th May 2014 10:18

Wonderfully succinct. Why is it a red room I wonder?

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