THE RED ROOM
There's a boy
In a house
In a room
Thinking of you.
There's a girl
In a house
In a room
Thinking of you.
There's a boy
There's a girl
Who believe
They are in the same room.
Comments
I like this one Em, I take it is a new life observation, in which the boy and girl just maybe one.
Wonderfully succinct. Why is it a red room I wonder?
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Emma
Fri 30th May 2014 10:09
Thank you for your positive feedback, I appreciate it.
I titled it "The Red Room" as red has connotations with love and the heart which is the main theme of the poem.
It is really about distance, not being with the one you love however, feeling within yourself that you are with them.