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I CAN TAKE A LITTLE PAIN...

I feel them raindrops, when pain rocks, my soul. Sitting here alone, black holes taking form, a man made storm, i feel the 'norm', slip away, battling with devils, man im tired of today, anxiety rising, as tears flood my eyes, its surprising, how nobody gives a fuck, until its their turn for crying, writing scriptures like predictions of my fate, visions haunt my dreams, and i dont wanna go that way, I CAN TAKE A LITTLE PAIN, but please just give me peace inside my brain, so my heart and him can find some middle ground, in my vains,i feel the blood rush, carrying the virus through my stream, silent screams, deflecting off a shattered screen, sun shining bright, returns to put the fight back in my spirit, I CAN TAKE A LITTLE PAIN, but what am i supposed to do with it?

◄ ESTATE SUMMER

SLUM KID....(dedicated to ashy valley flats) ►

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Francine

Tue 29th Dec 2009 18:57

Your writing, as I have said before, is so honest, raw, and heartfelt.
It moves me to read it...

xxx

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 14th Apr 2009 10:55

Hi Yosh, great stuff, read some of your other stuff but am just catching up and too much to comment on. This stood out though, nice work, cheers Jeff

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Noetic-fret!

Tue 31st Mar 2009 16:07

Absolutely fantastic Yoshman! I particularly like the line that says 'it's surprising, how nobody gives a fuck, until it's thier turn for crying!' I couldn't have put it better myself. There is some truth in the old addage, ignorance is bliss. Although these days, with so much goin on, and so much unfairness in society highlighted, I do wonder, if those that are ignorant, are doing it on purpose. In other words, turning the other way and neglecting to acknowledge the plight of those who really are suffering in society. It shouldn't be that way of course. But man has become a selfish devil unto himself and those around him. Particularly in the West. Brilliant piece of work, I been spouting about your work on the net, I hope you don't mind, hopefully you will gain more exposure. Be well blue.
Mike
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