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Where Will We Be Tomorrow?

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Where Will We Be Tomorrow?

Idly thinking I wonder where we will be in the future,

will we ever reach the stars after the death of our own world,

killed by pollution, war and overcrowding?

Will we do as in Rome, on a new planet? If we survive that far.

Our path is tough. Some actions we do are abysmal, look at how we treat one another. We do need to learn to talk and not shoot first.

Yet there is hope, when we look up at the cosmos over our heads,                                                     we can only wonder at its size and our tiny existence, we are not arrogant then. Brought down to earth, we know we have a chance, just one to get it right. If god were to judge us, what would he think?

Agree or disagree with the way we do things?

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nick armbrister

Sat 26th Apr 2014 14:37

thanx for reading. yes, its an ok poem. nowt special.

Lillian

Tue 22nd Apr 2014 20:42

This is very deep reasoning and it brings up many intreaguing questions. I liked your tone in the poem and I enjoyed the way you used simple words but brought great images and power through them. This is a great poem.

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