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bee shaped

I’d like you more if you built the world in the shape of a bee

Then it would be transportable

We would hum next to colourful flowers with soft petals

The earth would taste of honey

The air would be soft, full of warmth, furry

There would be others like us

Around us, being social

◄ a thought somewhere in england, 2009

I went to the picture house without you ►

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Sun 5th Apr 2009 13:55

Nice poem, yes...

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sat 28th Mar 2009 09:47

Hi Emily,
I really like this little poem.
Butterflies might actually live longer than one day too. :-)

Janet.x

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