The Claims Office: Dai George, Seren Books
Dai George is a young poet, born in Cardiff, who now lives in London but often returns to Wales. His debut collection shows a strong interest in religion and ancestors, is enriched by a deep sense of heritage, and he has also spent some time in America. In the centenary year of another Welsh poet, comparisons are tempting. But George is very much his own man.
There is perhaps one poem, early in the collection, âMergers and Acquisitionsâ, that self-consciously echoes Dylan Thomas a little in its language and length of lines. But there is also a realism here that faces the modern world head-on: âI walk back past terraced homes Iâll not / afford in a prism of Sunday springsâ, and an anger at a system that leaves people powerless: âSo may / our shareholdings melt away and leave / the bullion of our livelihoods: warm bread, / purchased homes, and money a neutral liquid.â George is certainly not going gently down any metaphorical country lanes, or losing himself in apple orchards.
Itâs maybe not that surprising that a young Welsh poetâs collection contains a number of poems about religion. In âDistraction During Evensongâ, George sees chapelâs comforting rituals disrupted by âa late arrival at the backâ, inducing the urge to âLeave now. Let the dinner burnâ, even as âthe choir whined beyond the lectern / wishful voices winding through the airâ. But there is also acknowledgement of religionâs half-forgotten heroes of the past, such as the translator of the Bible into English. In âTyndaleâ, âuncombed and open-neckedâ atheists are eyed with irritation, âin the heat of online arguments, / indignant in the snugs of heritage pubsâ, alongside the man, later executed in Brussels,
hounded to Antwerp, unravelling
The Pentateuchâs secret so that soon,
Somewhere back in Gloucestershire,
A ploughboy may know Godâs Fiat lux
In the ragged light of his own tongue.
George appears a little hard on himself at times. What he describes as a âuseless fetish for old men!â, in poems such as âJakey for the Third timeâ (âThis dour little scrumhalf, / thrice my age and fitterâ) , âChestnut Festivalsâ (âputting the finishing touches on his PhD / a few months shy of turning eightyâ) , and âSeven Rounds with Billâs Ghostâ (âscarecrowed in an album, / improving, tough to digest, / a bit like bran. Sweeter, mindâ) appears instead to this sexuagenarian reviewer as a commendable appreciation by a young man of achievements spread over lifetimes. Anyway, I think heâs being ironic.
There is, after all, a lot of humour in this collection. There is amused affection for ancestors in âThe Georgeâ, including a âHuguenot great grandsire ⊠donât / even get him started on the Treaty of Nantesâ, âthe highwayman / who someone traced to someoneâs distaff sideâ, and âthe gypsy someone had a tumble with, and hence / the auntieâs Persian eyes.â
And he is not wholly absorbed by Wales. There are poems about Bristol â âthose simpering shops of artisan cheese / and pre-electric kettles ⊠/ my mouth watering for salt fish and jerkâ (âA Clifton Postcodeâ), London - âPure inter-war and after, all roundabouts and Deco sprawlâ (âMetrolandâ) â and New York, where he received a Masters at Columbia â âat Union Sq, the frat boys come and goâ. There is also a conscious homage to Zimmerman in âQueenâs Lane Approximatelyâ, where in Oxford town âtheyâve sent back all your invitations / and they wonât be seeing you againâ.
George is not misty-eyed about his own past. âMy Peace, the Ornamentâ contains a succession of images of urban, industrial noise that
yank me back to days when childhoodâs brain
was a rammed junction, a crossing of trains, and the immaculate,
clockwork timetable of my peace was perverted, pinched, left to rot
in a puddle, as the carriages kept scraping and clanking their brakes.
The title poem of this collection has a confident sweep that demonstrates Georgeâs concerns about valuing the past, and also the craft, rhythm and music of his poetry: âWe maintain the records of our memory, / saving for posterity the string quartet / that packed the Institute, nights in a rowâ. Its final lines include these wishes for the future, in words that almost could be sung in chapel:
that one summer soon the lido will be full;
that the burnt heather will grow back gold;
that God is a steel mould into which we pour
molten yearnings
Itâs a good year to come across such a collection from a fine young Welsh poet.
Greg Freeman
Dai George, The Claims Office, Seren, ÂŁ8.99