Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Judging Justin

 

The net drips contempt

for a chicken

tied to sing in his teens;

from nothing out of nowhere,

unaware and unprepared.

Damaged

by the jagged

little splinters

made of gilt.

 

Contractually paid to play,

and play;

to play,

and play

again;

to make the pay his mother never could.

 

Brains of Braun - chicken pawn

can’t feel a silence of the mind

to rest,

recuperate.

Never to decelerate.

 

Atoms of his sanity exploding on TV.

Spiralling, signalling,

resisting, somersaulting.

Stripped by the media;

consumed, commodified,

dehumanised, and vilified.

This neverland will never last;

wishes made of dollars never do.

 

Take the plank from your eye -

a chicken speck of sawdust

costs a fortune,

lasts a lifetime,

narrows all of his tomorrows

fit to slide inside a bottle-necked fate.

 

 http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-us-canada-25954645

 

Justin Bieber

◄ No Justice (Page 7)

Before and After ►

Comments

C Byrne

Mon 10th Feb 2014 11:41

Thanks for your comment Laura.

This poem's ending is sublime!

Did you know there was a statistic that around 10% of Twitter activity was related to Justin Bieber a while back.

Share this on Twitter - you'll find many interested eyeballs! :)

Profile image

Laura Taylor

Tue 4th Feb 2014 09:18

Cheers both

Ha, yes Andy, it's gone up on Poetry24 today.

Never thought I'd ever find myself writing about Justin Bieber, of all people, but I was listening to the news the other day, and felt kinda sorry for the fella. All I've ever heard from other people about him is contempt. I looked him up and he literally did come from nothing. Quite a deprived background, and raised on a string of low-paid jobs by his single mother.

Who wouldn't take the opportunity that he did, with that background? But you can bet your arse he's worked to death - hence the constant barrage of his stuff on the media. And now we're seeing the consequences of that. It is really quite sad.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 3rd Feb 2014 13:35

tis an approving yes!.....;o)x

Profile image

Andy N

Mon 3rd Feb 2014 12:57

enjoyed this, Laura in particular

'Atoms of his sanity exploding on TV.

Spiralling, signalling,

resisting, somersaulting.

Stripped by the media;

consumed, commodified,

dehumanised, and vilified.

This neverland will never last;

wishes made of dollars never do.'

take it you are gonna be submitting this around to Poetry 24 and places similar. Has that kind of feel to that.

Not a fan of the lad in question. Don't think he can sing very much atall, but do feel sorry for him that the press are starting to hunt him like vultures.

Profile image

Laura Taylor

Mon 3rd Feb 2014 11:58

Yes...what?

;p Thank you for your considered critique Solar, I will definitely have a think about your suggestions. Glad you liked/disliked it.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 1st Feb 2014 23:52

yes!x

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message