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wish I could sculpt you

wish I could sculpt you

my hands are not experts
at chiselling chalk
I fear you may crumble
my legs have no memory
to replay the miles I walk for you
Humble, secretly I am there
shyly I care for you.
my hearts core
is iron ore of me
smelted
smitten
I came from an obelisk
a frustrated man
trying to express his love
in gestures predictable
I shower you with gifts
I hope this brings bedrock
to stand upon
yet still feelings shift
please may we never wash away?
this winter sway
of cold is cruel
stay and quell me
be only ever arms length away
so I can draw you in
when lonely moments
snap at me
I shall
paint with words
make a monument of you

◄ Dreams of leaving (audio version with rant)

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 22nd Mar 2009 09:44

This is beautiful Pete, your use of the English language amazes me, see ya soon Jeff

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Tue 10th Mar 2009 10:27

Hi Peter,
i'm in full agreement with Francine.
The same lines caught my eye too.
Beautiful piece of work.
Janet.x

Pete Crompton

Tue 10th Mar 2009 01:47

this ones for you to record Chris

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Chris Dawson

Tue 10th Mar 2009 00:24

Absolutely beautiful! Record it?
Cx

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Gus Jonsson

Mon 9th Mar 2009 17:17

Ahh Petie Petie Poo...

what a great old romancer ya are.....
Love ya ta bits
Gus

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Francine

Mon 9th Mar 2009 16:22

Such emotion and romanticism... I love
'be only ever arms length away
so I can draw you in
when lonely moments
snap at me'

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