You have lied to make me feel special,
I don't need your tainted charm,
Your contaminated feelings
Bring emotional harm !!
I am afraid of emptiness,
Our friendship no longer true
But I wonder if i can stand alone
Without thinking about you.
Disease of your affection is spreading like plague,
Your beauty like a virus attacking violently.
Not to worry, I'll be fine
I'll make it through the day
But when tomorrow comes
I won't have the courage to walk away !! SATYAJIT
Hi Satyajit, I was initially a bit concerned with the frequent reference to disease, but having read the last line it all made sense. I said this to emmy92 as well; It's like resignation to ones love, that, even though you may lose something of yourself, you are giving in to the demands of others because of love. It speaks of unconditional love in all honesty, but a love that cannot be returned.
Good piece of writing, better than my own. I hope my words here made sense, i appear to be going through a kind of block at the moment.
Keep writing and keep posting. Nice one.
Mike
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satyajit behera
Sun 27th Oct 2013 04:55
thank u sir...yeah love happens only,when n how we cant tell...and we cant force others for this also
and love itself says die for other...only thing is we fear to be lonely