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URBAN LULLABY

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URBAN LULLABY

 

Sing me a lullaby

Of breaking glass

The click of stilettoes

As they pass

The scrape of Cuban heels

On paving stones

 

Sing me a lullaby

Of drunken groans

Rock me to the rhythm

Of lovers moans

Leave the light on downstairs

As darkness falls

 

Sing  me a lullaby

Of cats on walls

Police sirens outside

The student halls

Lay me down to sleep in

My back street bed.

 

(c) David Subacchi

Liverpool poetryLiverpool Poetspoetry and music

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 21st Oct 2013 13:15

The rhymes are cleverly hidden by the stanza structure, and come to life best when spoken aloud. I really think they'd be easily missed in a rapid read.

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David Subacchi

Fri 11th Oct 2013 23:36

Thank you MC Newberry and Patricia ad Stefan Wilde.

I grew up living in an urban centre with the sounds of the streets all around me as I tried to sleep each night. How I miss those sounds today.

David

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 9th Oct 2013 16:42

An enjoyable (and identifiable) observation on
modern town/city existence.

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Sun 6th Oct 2013 22:14

enjoyed!xx

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David Subacchi

Sun 6th Oct 2013 21:43

You can find more of my poetry including some videos by searching on line for SUBACCHI + POET.

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