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It seemed just a pebble

A little pebble

Dropt into so small a pool.

Such enormous waves.

haiku

◄ Death

Straight Guy on a Pride March ►

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David Blake

Wed 31st Jul 2013 13:58

Excellent, flows right through from the title to the end in one heartfelt sweep.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 29th Jul 2013 16:17


Dave,
This is the kind of a haiku that we all hope one day to write.

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