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The Project

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The Project.

 

First:

Woke up to darkness

from a restless sleep.

A dream of colour,

light and steady beat.

Alone with my thoughts,

drifting on the void

until the idea

was fully employed.

 

Second:

Still dark, much later,

getting what I need.

Some paint, certainly,

plaster, wood and seed.

Starlight and fire,

ice and molten rocks.

Things I’ve been storing

in a little box.

 

Third:

Mix up that with that.

Bang- at last some light.

Splatter some of this –

white pinpricks on night.

Build layers of matter,

roll them into balls

and send them spinning

off in gassy squalls.

 

Fourth:

Self doubt sidles in.

Chaos now abounds.

Things refuse to set

and flip-flop around,

while others bubble

like simmering soup.

Atoms blow apart.

Electrons group.

 

Fifth:

I juggle with gems,

Letting crystals fall

on black crushed velvet.

There are ten in all.

The red, the amber,

stones of unknown hue.

One, I choose to cut,

shimmers green and blue.

 

Sixth:

I carve each valley,

chisel every crag.

Sandpaper deserts,

stitch and sew each rag.

Rub, spit and polish

facets to a shine.

Among the spinning

orbits –  one is mine.

 

Seventh:

So very tired now –

time, at last to rest –

but just one detail

to create a test.

Into perfection

webs of dust are spun

that aeons hence will

question all I’ve done.

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David Blake

Wed 10th Jul 2013 10:47

Nice work Ian. An excellent 'Seventh' especially.

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Isobel

Wed 26th Jun 2013 08:18

Food for thought indeed - I didn't quite get the feeling of loneliness from it - but I suppose you could argue that there's no-one more misunderstood or isolated than a God like creator.

Fascinating, and I love the ending.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 25th Jun 2013 20:48

Well written and certainly made me think

<Deleted User> (9882)

Tue 25th Jun 2013 20:28

I thought the Beatles said there were eight days (in)a week Ian? so what happened to the eighth?

ah! I know!

The big feller came to realise that two Mondays didn't go down well with working people.

mmmm,working people,a dying breed methinks
and certainly without the slightest reference
to B(W)ankers.

Seriously though,Ian,an excellent poem.x

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Jun 2013 23:38

We aren't half a set of shitty ingrates, aren't we?

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