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The earth and her lover

 


Shhh……

 

The silence of the snow as it,

Carries the winter across the land,

It is unnerving,

Each flake, a spirit waiting to be reborn,

Its new, its concealing, its inviting,

A white mask descends onto the face of mother earth,

It covers her history of wrinkles,

Her centuries of faults and all her impurities,

She becomes new once again,

Clean…. Fresh…. Untouched,

Once again a virgin she awaits her lovers first kiss, and,

He surrenders to her innocence,

Her sinlessness, her emptiness,

He is beguiled,

He tempts her with his strength and power,

His breath seizes her, she freezes,

This moment is captured forever, if he chooses,

He envelopes her with his brightness, his fullness, his magnetism,

She is his once more,

Their passion awakens behind a blizzard of lust, hunger and want,

She trembles in the brightness of night, then,

Shhh……

Silence,

He releases her and she is alone again,

Solitude,

Warmth and fullness her only company,

Her river of tears strips away the beauty that captured him,

Her ages creep back,

Her foundations weaken,

Her oceans swell with heaviness,

The sunrise brings light again,

And she is ready,

It is time,

She gives birth to the new,

For this is the life bringer season

 

Tina Ford

◄ My first love

The Mirror ►

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Tina Ford

Sat 25th May 2013 10:31

Thank you yvonne. i see what you mean, but i was trying to describe the snow becoming thicker and higher as it covered the land. I think descends could work also. Thank you very much x

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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 25th May 2013 00:19

excellent, descriptive, sensual piece and quite moving.
I just query the word ascends rather than descends in line 6. I kept re-reading that part and felt that, as snow falls, I was linking that image to 'descends' but maybe as the snow piles higher it is 'ascending '. Very enjoyable.XX

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Tina Ford

Fri 24th May 2013 17:34

Thanks Andy x

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Andy N

Fri 24th May 2013 12:44

lot of good stuff here, tina. maybe a little long for me, but i did still enjoy it x

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 18:56

Hello Freda, thank you very much for your lovely comment x

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Freda Davis

Thu 23rd May 2013 18:14

I am enjoying going back over your entries Tina. There are lots of things I really like: what you write about, your stories, the humour. Great stuff.

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Tina Ford

Wed 22nd May 2013 01:41

Thank you x

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Wed 22nd May 2013 00:22

wonderful Tina.xx

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