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In The Belly Of The Whale

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In The Belly Of The Whale.

 

In a silent chamber

a disc of shining gold

has crossed the void

for thirty five years or more,

a blink in its ultimate journey

to exit the solar system

and span the galaxy.

 

This Voyager –

spinning, spiralling, swooping

in a cold, dark, vacuum.

Waiting to sing

for unknown creatures

at the other side of the sky,

whilst the pale blue dot

of planet earth disappears

in the rear view mirror

of this solitary traveller

in the depths of space.

 

Onward.

Ever onward.

 

The sound of thunder, surf and wind.

The plaintive cries of birds and whales.

 

Greetings spoken

in the ancient and modern

tongue of man.

 

Blind Willie Johnson’s screaming howls

of guitar and downtrodden blues.

Chuck Berry rocking like a dervish

and the chaotic chimes of Mozart.

 

All unheard.

Waiting to be discovered,

to be understood

by others.

 

Casting human souls

into the cosmic breeze.

 

Transmitting

on all frequencies,

yet – no response

for ever and ever

without end.

 

A plaintive,

sincere, message

etched upon

Its casing

from a civilisation

who have, probably,

passed into oblivion

through war, plague

or hunger.

 

 

“To the makers of music –

All worlds, all time”

52 Hertz

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I Wish I Had A Harley ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 22nd May 2013 02:05

This has some very effective lines. It's a huge challenge.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 21st May 2013 23:08

man needs to make a much better conquest first-
the conquest of himself,eh big guy?
(as in me poem-'Darkside'...plug plug!)

This is such a cooooool poem

cheers Ian.xx

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Francine

Tue 21st May 2013 17:08

I like the idea and thought behind 'Casting human souls
into the cosmic breeze' in the sense that we live on...

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Rachel Bond

Tue 21st May 2013 02:08


i love the idea of the space time casting of nets for a returned frequency..im always on about man knowing more of space than the sea...baffles me. its a frightening idea that we are alone and i love your example of musicians representing our sounds.

cosmic !

title great too, in this context says so much x

loved it

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Isobel

Mon 20th May 2013 20:43

"Casting human souls
into the cosmic breeze."

What an eerie thought Ian - and what a great take on the theme. How sad to think that we are just a blip in the universe, a grain of sand in the great scheme of things. And if something like that landed on Earth - just what would we hear, and what would we make of it?

Fascinating questions and poem. Thanks for writing something. x

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