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Moonlight, Roses and You

Moonlight - and you

Roses - the scent

Whispers your name

 

Golden hair, aromatic smile

                    Tantalizing

Laughter in your eyes

Captured - a gentle bite of your lips - sweet

 

The dance of rapport

Rhythm, movement

Waves - soft, smooth

                   Breathless motion

 

Ocean - lapping, rolling, crashing, caressing the rocks

The spray - exploding into the midnight sky

 

                    And you

                                                A sigh

 

The surf, languid to the shore - spent

Soaking onto the golden sand

 

Moonlight, roses - and you

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 20th Apr 2013 14:48

Some very romantic images, whether real or imaginary, a lovely moment. What is an 'aromatic smile'? I am intrigued - Wine? Cigarettes? Cherry-flavoured lipstick? It is an unusual combination.

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John Coopey

Fri 12th Apr 2013 21:29

I was drawn to this, Mike, by its title.
"Moonlight and Roses" was my mother's favourite song although I never knew it until she died and my dad told me.
I really like some of the short lines and quick images - "aromatic smile" and "dance of rapport".

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