Cromer

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the sea is rattling bones today

and the wind holds my ears to ransom

for want of a scarf and a hat

 

she is walking on the promenade

and wants no part of the play

 

so I am talking to the man on the pier

with the rods and ask

“what’s your game?“

 

whiting

and if he’s lucky

bass

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Comments

darren thomas

Thu 4th Apr 2013 12:38

'The sea is rattling bones today'.

A great hook. Full rhymes. Assonance. And more going on behind the scene.

Nice one.

dt

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 3rd Apr 2013 23:31

Bloomin' cold in Cromer at this time of the year especially without a hat. Really sad that the lady walks on. A cleverly captured moment.

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