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Small Things

 
These are the frightening things of half understood
memories; traipses of corn ears furrowed by a field
wrapped within the sun and its shadows.
 
Someone walks into it blinded by the white
stretch; their hands over their eyes - those grilled black fingers
unkind to touch, cowardly bent.
 
Faceless, the rows of industrial secrets
bend and thread;  their limbs forming one
muscle of silver, a veil of cold glass
 
each turn reflects; the farms of incomprehensive crops.
The tools used, teasing the earth from its clay
packs, are tooth-sore; incessant grinds
 
where appetite has not been, turbine jaws
where water has not spread – things done
without knowing why.
 
Ploughing through the mist,
hands grab but small things only;
their palms broken up with lines.

 

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 11:04

yeah I have! Am a big fan of Philip Glass and they are excellent films!! Yes yes!

Thank you for the comments, I have been writing alot recently and have found myself seeking now, as you so well observed Cynthia, an intense desire to be more clearly understood even though the motive behind what I am writing is still dream-like. I want to always push so your appreciating comments are very encouraging. Thank you.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 22nd Mar 2013 10:47

Really atmospheric and dark piece this. You know what it reminded me of? Have you ever seen the trilogy of films by Godfrey Reggio, Koyaanisqatsi,
Powaqqatsi, and Naqoyqatsi?

This reminds of me the second one, Powaqqatsi. Would recommend you watch them actually, reckon they're right up your street :) Can get them all on youboob.

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Rachel Bond

Thu 21st Mar 2013 23:53

good poe mariane, lovely imagery as you always invoke. i like the 'thread' throughout, the 'muscle of silver' specifically and the contrast of worlds from the 'fields of industry' to the veined palm.

thanks x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 21st Mar 2013 17:33

I find a different 'sophistication' in your work, perhaps an intense desire to be more clearly understood as you personally cipher your own world. Your diction is, as always, just superb.

I'm probably way off base. My brain seems to be exploding with meanings probably never meant. I feel like a helpless robot wired to 'receive'- it's very weird.

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