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Ma Third Eye

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              Ma Third Eye

Every day me get in a stress

About some little ting

Life sometimes can be ard

Ya never no what it bring

People try and dis me

But me no gonna cry

Cause I got da protection off

Ma third eye

 

Da spirit often moves me

But me still cannot find ma way

I and I is lost in da wilderness

Mi hope me find salvation one day

When me ave no where ta turn

Me get on ma knees an pray

But on one ting I can rely

Ma third eye

 

Da world is in a big mess

All dis destruction an war

Preaching freedom and democracy ?

What are dey all fighting for

It’s all getting too much

Me jus can’t take no more

Away I want ta fly with

Ma third eye

 

                                           Pinky

 

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Tom Doolan

Wed 23rd Jan 2013 11:40

Hi guyz - Thanks for comments. I lived and worked in Jamaica back in 95/96 so picked up da patois lilt. My nickname was Pinky lol.

<Deleted User> (10123)

Mon 21st Jan 2013 05:39

Really fine piece of patois. Nailed it good boss. Fighting for peace is tantamount to fucking for virginity, hey man wot you tink?
ta muchly,

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Noetic-fret!

Sun 20th Jan 2013 01:21

Good effort mun!

Mike

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 18th Jan 2013 21:43

worx for uz dude!xx

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