Again and Again
It hurts again in my head again
Wide asleep into the bright blinding light
Sick of the sight again
Of the long cold night again
Pain an always ever
Never warm in my bed again
Comments
Could not agree more with Ros and Isobel. Come on now...!
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tony sheridan
Tue 8th Jan 2013 20:11
Well done. Take care, Tony.
This isn't what I thought it was going to be - in subject matter.
Like the repetition and internal rhyme that gives it rythm - but don't like you writing another sad one :(
Let's have some more of your jingly jangly tingly tangly naughty stuff please!
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Gus Jonsson
Wed 9th Jan 2013 12:17
Well ...
Thank you ladies for your... advice and attached embrace.... and I appreciate that Francine's is a French kiss, i meant that tongue in cheek.
The implication, from your comments is I believe, of late I'm feeling a little bruised and as a consequence feeling sorry for myself, and should with immediate effect dust myself off and get on with being a happy Gus.
You may be surprised to know that the short stanza posted above was the 1st of many, 1,242 at the last count. An epic so dark and dire in it's content that I may well have been responsible for tens of thousands of lovers the world wide...
... going down.....coming together and ending it all in a blaze of gory glory midst a silver shimmering shower of moons and stars!!
I couldn't live with that...well not just at the moment anyway!
Yes, you are right ladies ... I will endevour to enable you tingle and sizzle in all the right places in all future postings.
Appropriate embraces and titillations.
And by the way, thank you Tony... good to hear from you too!!
Many thanks to all
lots of love
Gus xxx