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Burdens

 

Burdens
 
Dogs wade through the pond
where tadpoles fight to right themselves
swirling in clouds of grit.
 
Beyond the pond, 
through the trees that arc over
Doris Pastore’s bench, 
down the dew slick sloping field,
across the old leather tanning brook;
on the other side of an old wall
cars steam along the wet road.
 
He sits in soft leather 
seeing the world through a green tinted screen.
Rocking out to Springsteen, chasing her tail.
 
In the letterbox mirror she sees
sleek Vorsprung der technik, pushing her.
 
She slows.
 
Beyond the old wall, 
across the old leather tanning brook,
up the dew slick sloping field,
through the trees that arc over
Doris Pastore’s bench;
beyond the pond
where sleek black whales shine dead in an ocean sun.
 
Bluebells nod with the weight of burdened bees.
 

◄ Winter Heart

Thare Is Na Time That Wull Nae Come Again ►

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Neil Fawcett

Mon 7th Jan 2013 17:56

cheers dave.

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Neil Fawcett

Mon 7th Jan 2013 17:55

Thanks Darren.

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Dave Bradley

Mon 7th Jan 2013 15:30

I enjoyed this. Nicely paced and understated. Very evocative - got the imagination going.

darren thomas

Mon 7th Jan 2013 15:15

I enjoyed reading this. The contrast between the opening and (toward) the poem's conclusion compelled me to read it again. And again. 'cars steam along the wet road' evokes a great image too.

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Neil Fawcett

Mon 7th Jan 2013 12:53

Cheers Steve. No, not a fancy form, not that I know of anyway.

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