Thoughts Coupled
sexuality not sensual
gutters out
if sensuality equates sexuality
finesse unplumbed
true intimacy of senses
transcends body
so simple so easy
so rare
cbt
Comments
Not sure how you've done it Cynthia, but this poem demands attention and makes one really think about each word (which I'm in agreement with too).
Good to see you back Cynthia!
If true sensuality is about the senses and not the body, I'm right with you.
I've had to re- read this more than a few times to make sure I'm understanding it correctly. It's an admirable poem and concept. Yes - it would be rare to find someone you could be like that with.
beautiful Cynthia... for some reason the words seem as if sweet shisha smoke... there is luxurious simple rhythm to it which I love.
'finesse unplumbed' mmMMM
Dainty structure, to do with the most fragile of feelings - this is lovely Cynthia. Succinct, delicate, expressing what I would say is a truth :)
With thanks to my compadres at Poetica for their excellent input.
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Harry O'Neill
Mon 12th Nov 2012 23:30
Cynthia,
All definitely true...the truest line is the last one.