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Texperiments: Winston reflects on 'amazing' response

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Winston Plowes has delivered his verdict on the Texperiments involving poetic text messages he conducted on behalf of National Poetry Day last month.

“Dear Texters, Texperiments HQ has now closed. Firstly, can I thank you for taking part in this nationwide SMS poetry experiment. And so many of you did. including lots of Write Out Loud members. Fifteen different experiments took place, each loosely following the consequences format (some of you might know this as exquisite corpse). I must say that the results were more amazing than I could have imagined. I’ve have lots of positive feedback so far, including calls for the project to re-run next year. Here are some snapshots of my favourite results. Remember, contributors sent in their string of words having only seen the line before. You can see the full set of results here or by visiting the Facebook page of National Poetry Day, which commissioned this project.” 

 

 
 

Constellations can

spin wildly.

Fluorescent thoughts

blind me

with promises.

Made softly,

broken fiercely.

Grinding glass

calms the

Earth’s fall.

 

 

The talented fool,

my dearest love.

My kittiwake, my

sea foam spirit

 

 

Through the window I see no star,

sodium light nulls night. Let me dream

wandering pathways. Looking for that

perfect moon.

 

 

 


The genius box

hides foolish sins.

Again and again

the river nudges.

 

If a falling star

means you are gone.

Dead inside my womb

cold like a snail

 

The dark star

freezes my heart

like this river

swollen by rain

 

The dark star

reflects only itself.

Its bitter teeth

ground winter down

 

Beyond Starlight’s reach

early evening glitters.

A beetle sheen

coats the bottle.

 

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Francine

Wed 14th Nov 2012 01:00

I actually DID check out your website. : /

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winston plowes

Wed 14th Nov 2012 00:35

Hi Francine, thanks for that. The poems shown were derived from different experiments so you will not see the ‘divergence’ in these examples but you will if you look at these poetry experiments on my site here - http://www.winstonplowes.co.uk/#/projects-npd-full-results/4570513891

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Francine

Tue 13th Nov 2012 06:38

Well, I find this interesting, though I couldn't quite follow the divergence.

My fave lines from what you posted here...


'Let me dream

wandering pathways. Looking for that

perfect moon'


'The genius box

hides foolish sins.'


This experiment reminds me of the poem 'Bone Dry (and Destitute) - the plight of two children. I no longer see the original though.

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