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Desire

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Like life

I don’t desire to lose it

so I embrace it

I kiss the boot

I tell my secrets

I spill the beans

 

Her boots have done their walking

and trodden-in dreams

and wasted talking

and yet it’s still worth it

 

Let me live, please let me live!

 

Thumbs down

to thumb screws

but rather that than nothing

 

A crown of thorns, please

with gore-berry juice

and a flake sticking out

at the moment of melting

 

A prickly pair of pugnacious partners

poking and stabbing each other now and then

even if mainly then

someone to feel

connected to

then disconnected from…

 

Is there anyone out there?

Yes, but they’re all light years away

spinning

receding

into black holes

and holes of other colours too

 

Which one would you like, son?

I told you

any one will do

 

Just knocked this one off tonight while messaging. Whaddaya mean, it shows?

◄ Happy New Year

Becoming less like God ►

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 9th Feb 2009 20:25

Hi Tony, all the best mate!

I'm still catching up with stuff, and I have to admit I like this diversion from your usual stuff, great!

Like this -
A prickly pair of pugnacious partners
poking and stabbing each other now and then

- could be difficult after a few beers! Ha, see you soon Jeff

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 2nd Jan 2009 23:38

Hey Big Whats wrong with Funny... Try being Seriously Funny... have your work cut out there I can tell you.
Regards Gus

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Chris Dawson

Fri 2nd Jan 2009 23:32

try east ... definitely less frivolous.
Cx

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 2nd Jan 2009 22:37

Who takes all the pics of you....and have you got any of any one else.... not that you're not a pretty boy....say cheese!
HNY
Gus

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Chris Dawson

Fri 2nd Jan 2009 22:34

January seems to have affected you darkly! and isn't this the second grave pic you've posted? - very serious.
Like the poem - do things recede into black holes? ... I thought they were pulled, inexorably.
Cx

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