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WAR OF WORDS (Acrostic)

Wrestling with his conscience

Abstaining from verbal exchange

Regretting his words

 

Offended by obscenities

Forgetting his ticket

 

What is happening now?

Obnoxious little men

Rallying in no mans land

Dire consequences

Spasmodic verbal abuse.

 

© Hazel

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Laura Taylor

Tue 23rd Oct 2012 14:41

Mmmm...another great poem Hazel. I think experimenting with this form has been really good for you. Have you tried any other forms? I use haiku sometimes to break me out of the endless patterns of rhythms I fall into.

Keep at it - you're producing some really good work lately :)

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 21st Oct 2012 18:32


Hazel,
nicely done acrostic...but all it needed for a title was a clue to the subject,(let them work out it`s an acrostic themselves)

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