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devon

 

green bladed squares

stretched out before me

separated by shapely lines

in many varying shades

of darker green;

patchwork scenery

in valleys and dells

that make up much of devon,

clusters of white houses

every so often.

 

train passes naval docks

at plymouth

where we spy

war ships including

an aircraft carrier

in expanse of water.

 

soon we approach

much wider expanses

of the tamar estuary

as we alight on

magnificent construction

of the brunel bridge

taking us into

cornwall and saltash.

 

scenery reverts to fields

and trees once more,

some swathed in cloud,

others washed in sunshine

as we are heading for

beautiful beaches of hayle

and the promise of a reunion,

a meal with my sister

in hell’s mouth café.

◄ Reality

fishy tale ►

Comments

Philipos

Tue 16th Oct 2012 18:54

Always something very compelling about naval dockyards and you capture the scene just right. Well done Lynn & thanks for commenting on 'Sounds of the Wilderness.'

tony sheridan

Thu 11th Oct 2012 00:26

Another good one Lynn. Have to go and put wood in'th hole. Bit chilly! Take care, Tony.

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 10th Oct 2012 23:37

It's Devonian Lynn (although I'm originally from oop North tha knows!)
Literal translation:

"Devon is a wondeful place. People from Cornwall are as daft as brushes."

(I bet they speak The Queen'sEnglish (or at least the BBC version in leafy Hertfordshire!) :)

Regards,
A.E.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 10th Oct 2012 21:23

Thank you Stef and Tricia for your kind comment, actually we all ate bakewell tart with clotted cream for dessert, made a change from greengage pie anyway!!

Thank you Anthony - wish I understood your comment! lol

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 10th Oct 2012 20:49

were greengages on the menu Lynn?
and who ate the most pies?-haha.

This be that thayer number one poem
thars done serfar lass.

We wont say too much about the 'spying' eh-
or it might be a trip
to guantanamoland for you!!

Ta for 'kind reply'by the way.xx

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 10th Oct 2012 20:11

'Tis proper viddy yer Lynn! (They Kernow folk, they'm be mazed as brishes tho!) :)

Regards,
A.E.

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