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Negative Equity

I was told the old fashioned way, you know.

I remember my little gran telling me,

stories of how they knocked on your door

as she rhymed off the angels around my bed

and softly stroked the hair

on my aching head.

 

I remember hers arrived,

we had to pack up her whole house and she came to live with me

I was ecstatic, but i missed her four angels at each corner of the bed.

 

then she left, and never said goodbye

I asked my mium why and made her cry

I even asked her why little gran was

stood at the end of the hall

in the cold.

I sat with her once all night

it was nice, and I felt warm

snuggled in the yellow light

but, in the morning she was gone

and never said goodnight

 

Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 13th Oct 2012 00:04

To be in the presence of such a welcome ghost is both sad and beautiful.
A similar situation developed after the death of my mum-in-law.
The new people(total strangers)who moved into her vacated house told us both at some point they had seen a ghost in one of the bedrooms.
The description was exactly that of my mum-in-law-down to the usual fag in her mouth.
Lord please make the smokers stand outside the pearly gates when they light up!

Spooky eh.
Lovely poem very much enjoyed-thank you.xx

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 10th Oct 2012 13:31

I found some delightful imagery at work here...conjuring up the real and imagined in intriguing juxtaposition.

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