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Girl

 
She folds in the corners of the napkin,
lips tight, something hidden -
her head tilting in the light of  lace;
the window drawing in a space untested.
 
The shelter of her play sighs;
a fluttering of pages  a diary encouraged
for parts of her not to see,
just know as quick as her laughter disguises.
 
For years I have seen these fields
ripple in her hair,
her distant cloud roll and bruise,
the honey maze and blotted blue -
 
the Eden shift in her tears,
and each time I looked I saw a new -
a hum of  spring.
I see a girl twirl the glass,
 
now old enough to hold,
bold enough to her own frustration,      
for we talk about nothing and more –
the sweet of youth and friends.
 
The things she would like to own she does;
there is no light blossom smiled upon
more so than her sun pinched face -
a jewel enough to make heaven cry;
 
the grace of her freckled nose.
She is something more wise than I;
a strength of will, enchanted,
complete in this kin, this table we share –
 
the tint of her grin suggests
looking out to the world before her;
a box of paints
and a woman’s heart growing.

 

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 5th Oct 2012 12:41

Thank you for your comments.

xx

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garside

Thu 4th Oct 2012 12:52

mint

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Mick Waring

Thu 4th Oct 2012 12:20

marianne .. could be called 'daughter' ? .. excellent.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 4th Oct 2012 11:52

A beautiful piece Marianne :) I absolutely LOVE that last verse, so touching

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