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Supercar

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In my life I have seen many modes of transport

But never before such a weird thing as this,

Recently I was given the chance of a ride

An experience I didn’t want to miss.

 

“Is it a bus?  Is it a tube?  Is it a train?

No, it’s Supercar!” I felt the urge to quip.

Many people did double takes as we passed,

It was certainly a most enjoyable trip.

 

It was originally built for an advert,

But now owned by the Epping Ongar Rail,

To promote steam trains on newly opened line

Through the forest on their heritage trail.

 

My man who has driven many buses and trains,

Joked he could drive this in either direction,

Though not both at once as somebody said,

And on rails that may be another question!

◄ Downtrodden Youth

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Lynn Dye

Wed 22nd Aug 2012 14:53

Hi Stella, the joins were fine and well made, actually, although it only went at 45 miles an hour!
Thank you for comment.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 22nd Aug 2012 11:01


How strange is that?...What were the joins like?..and how fast did you go...talk about a split personality!!

:))

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Lynn Dye

Wed 22nd Aug 2012 10:17

Lol, Stef. He mostly drives me up the wall with being intentionally silly, haha.

It was certainly an experience riding in such a strange vehicle, probably deserves a better poem! Thanks for comment. xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Mon 20th Aug 2012 23:28

Just the ticket Lynn.
you mention'my man has driven
many buses and trains'

You should have added
a 'steamy line'(no pun intended)
about how he drove you mad with....ahem!
haha.xx

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