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While I Was Writing Something Else...

 

Olympics? I thought, what a lot of expense!

I shan’t write any poetry on that.

But then ‘Endeavour’ just happened along,

It seemed to pop straight out of my hat!

While I was writing about something steamy

A sporty angle took over instead,

I had to go back and change the first line

To get the whole thing out of my head.

 

I haven’t watched any of the events,

It has really all just passed me by,

But maybe a little of the spirit

Decided to pop up and say, “Hi!”

My ode’s careful not to mention Olympics,

It’s all about excelling in sport.

I never tagged it for the competition

Even though that is what people thought.

 

So now what do I do with the stupid thing?

Should I forget it, delete it or tag it?

Well, it got a couple of nice comments

Though Tommy Carroll thought it a maggot!

 

P.S. I think I agree...  :o)

◄ Endeavour

Abandonment ►

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Lynn Dye

Sun 12th Aug 2012 09:29

Haha, more like shorts and fit-flops, Stef!
It was one of those "think up a first line and see where it takes you" type of poem, but seeing as I changed the first line, it was free to take me off somewhere else.
Thanks for comment, another coming up. xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 11th Aug 2012 18:52

While you were
'writing about something steamy'and
'sporty angle took over instead' Lynn-
were you wearing jogging shoes and track suit
at the time?

Bung a steamy one on Lynn and we,ll be first
to award you a donging big golden donger-
and wont you love it! haha!xx

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