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for mother

Something wonderful

Don’t focus on the negative-
too much of it already.
better left unsaid
its not worthy.
we all share it
all know its there
darkness does its to own work.
brighter things she said
are better
loving things she said
theyre better
makes it better
should enter troubled heads
more often
so now I nurture
it helps with the smiling
Shant dwell in the dark
rather, soften
as I realise
hands alone cannot change the hard
shouting has never softened the shard
upon which we are all cut
from time to time
yes all of us
share mine, yes
and ill share yours
bless
see, now, how we all smile!
under feet
Pave gold, goes our troubled mile!
every day a test but
let light in, if only a while
a start
you must do
it helps you live
opens heart
brighter things need not be chained
or elusive she said
you are imperfect she said
accept yourself
once wound, once bled
gone now, safe
let it all go, give
to someone, heal
you can you do, Ive seen you
tension makes a prisoner
bars are made to see thru
escape
with wondrous things in heart
stronger is your shield
and yes
let the guard down sometimes
for that’s important too
as
Love can’t get in if you block it
and
Light only makes shadows
If you stop it
this
list of loving things
mother said
shall
find light in which to write
for she had given birth
so passage comes to light
this sun
now I breathe these waterfalls
where once the dead of night

◄ spores

tacky falaraky ►

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Francine

Sun 10th May 2009 01:24

This is very heartfelt... you express so well...
I too was drawn to these lines:

'Love can’t get in if you block it
and
Light only makes shadows
If you stop it'

<Deleted User> (5247)

Sun 23rd Nov 2008 19:50

Thank you. Mum xx

<Deleted User> (5247)

Sun 23rd Nov 2008 19:47

At last I see some sunshine I knew it was in there, waiting, for a break in the clouds. Tears fell from my eyes like the rain, my boy, now a man, I send showers of love to you, and may the dark shadows be washed away with love. Mum xxx

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Andy N

Sun 23rd Nov 2008 00:09

Good poem, Pete.. The ending works well there also!

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clarissa mckone

Fri 21st Nov 2008 20:57

Peter,This is such a nice and open poem.This is full of wisdom, and much of it from your heart. Your Mother is right in many ways.We as humans have to have an outlet for our pain, it really all is the same pain, just different twists of fate. I am guilty in the sence that most of my poems are kinda sad and depressed.It is a rare poem, to come from me, that is light and happy and full of flowers. I cant explain it away. I tend to write dark poems about power and control. That may be because I feel, I have no power or control.In such a pain filled world, it is hard to find happy. Not that Im unhappy all the time, not that I dont have happy days, because I do, many of them. I do think some people, esp poets feel pain more deeply then do others, and feel a desperate need to express it.Or posibly explode. I enjoyed very much this poem, I esp like that same part that Sarah enjoyed.Your Mom is great, and she loves you very much, I can tell.I will say one last thing, There is no greater love, then that of a Mother for her child. We always have hope. Aww now I better stop, Im going on and on. great one Peter!

Pete Crompton

Thu 20th Nov 2008 15:02

Sarah I'm glad you like that stanza, its my fave

<Deleted User> (5164)

Thu 20th Nov 2008 12:55

a beutiful tribute

i am sooo keeping my eye on your poems
i really enjoy reading your poems

''Love can’t get in if you block it
and
Light only makes shadows
If you stop it''
-fantastic!

sez x


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